By Joan Whetzel
I've written a lot of articles, books, and blogs - most of them
good, some of them less than stellar. I have read far more articles, books and
blogs than I have written. Most of them good, some of them less than stellar.
There are 5 things these authors do that drive me crazy as a reader.
1) Not
Enough Research
It doesn't
matter whether the writer is creating fiction or nonfiction pieces, if
something committed to the page smacks of not having done the research, it's
not only bad writing, it's laziness. When writer's commit one lack-of-research
error I, as a reader, might forgive him or her. But if it happens repeatedly, I
will put down the book or magazine, or navigate away from the website in search
of a better writer.
2) Stopping
Mid-Story to Explain Things
The opposite of number one, is the writer who does the research,
and feels the overwhelming need to stop and explain things to the reader, as if
we readers are too stupid to figure it out. Quit explaining stuff to me, and
tell me the story. This is a show, don't tell moment. Show me what's going on,
but please rein in that urge to explain things that I probably already know, or
can infer from the writing - so long as it's good writing. I've been trying to
read a novel by a writer who suffers from this condition. If I can get through
the book, I'll write you a review.
3) Rambling
Roses
This sin is particularly bad with nonfiction writers, for some
reason. They dance around the point without ever finding it. I want to scream
at them to "Just get to the point already!" Then follow up by sending them
recommendations to a couple of good editing classes.
4) Grammar
and Spelling Errors
There's no excuse for failing to run grammar and spell checks.
I've failed on this one a time or two, to my own shame. The corollary to this
one, is choosing a word that sounds like the word you're looking for, but is
spelled differently. Those one's are the writing tricksters that have gotten
many a writer into trouble.
5) Rewriting
the Same Story - Over and Over Again.
Okay, most writers will take an old story and rewrite it, or
give a new spin, or update it with more recent examples. No harm in doing that.
I've done it a time or two myself. Where the problem occurs, is when a writer
hooks on one set of facts and pieces of information, and just keeps writing the
story, and writing the story, and writing the story, until the world is sick of
hearing it. It's like the writer is saying he or she can't be bother to learn
about anything else.
Bo-o-oring! It's not going to take very long for readers to
figure out that this writer is a one-trick-pony - aka a one-hit-wonder - and go
looking for other authors.
If you find yourself in one of these categories, see what you
can do to re-write your writing skills. You may just find your readers coming
back to you, and bringing a few other readers with them. It's well worth the
effort of ridding yourself of these lazy writing habits.
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